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Re: Turning The Knives 7
Hey its IR. Its a pleasure to review your story and i hope you find it helpful away from their hiding spot as they filled with water. I got a ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: The Queen's Gambit Chaps 1 and 2
Hey, Its IR, here's what i half to think of your story so far. Ok, this probably wont be the best review, its my third. The first thing i saw ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Calling All Heroes
Hi, its infinite reality. This poem really was full of strong emotion. this is only my second critique but ill try to give some helpful info. One thing that really ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Prologue - Pawns (Stand in Name) - Novel
HI, it's infinite reality. Ok, the whole prologue was great . Some little things would make it better. 1. Explain what the magi are. Even if the reader knows, its ...
Oct 4, 2009